http://nyc-detective.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] nyc-detective.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] capeandcowllogs 2010-01-22 08:22 pm (UTC)

Aw, that's okay! I usually just wing it and notice atrocious typos after it's too late to fix them!

She had to commend Saitou for his incredible emotional control, if nothing else. It was the mark of a truly good officer. Blind rage and the desire for revenge lead to sloppy work and amateurish mistakes, and those were the kinds of mistakes their meager force simply could not have.

"Well, tell you what, you have first dibs on Slade when we put him away for this," she grinned. "And you'll survive that particular fight because I said so." Tapping a pen on the desk briskly, Elisa processed the next bit of information.

"Was Slade deliberately fighting you as a distraction, or did Cavil merely sense his opportunity and take it?" she asked. "And was this when Horrible hit you with his freeze ray thing?"

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